Special pleading and deliberate perversion
apart, the novel's text in its first four numbers
(to Chapter 16) states unmistakably that the
murder of a nephew has been committed in or about
a cathedral church in the early hours of a
Christmas Day which has fallen on a Sunday. It is
of course possible that this coincidence of time
and place was undesigned; but students of Dickens,
who have noted his meticulous care in building up
environmental detail in previous novels, will
doubt it. They will expect to find a purpose
behind facts which have been so carefully and
plainly underlined by the author. With such a
background, the purpose in this case must surely
be related in some way to religion. Jasper
strikes at the Cathedral and what it stands for
in his own mind, quite as much as at the actual
victim, his over-successful nephew. He has become
the figure of antichrist, the Man of Sin. And
Dickens, showing antichrist desecrating the
Cathedral's altar under cover of the Cathedral's
bland unconscious guardians in the persons of the
Dean and Mr. Tope, is offering to his readers of
1870 a considerable shock.
Dickens's notes for Chapter XII (originally
Chapter XI but altered to allow for under-writing
in the first two numbers) are as follows:
A Night with Durdles
* * *
Lay the ground for the manner of the Murder, to
come out at last.
Keep the boy suspended.
Night picture of the Cathedral.
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As Dickens is using his own
phrase here - 'Lay the ground' - quoted earlier
from his letter to Collins (see p. 17) and in a
similar context, i.e., preparing for later
revelation, another exercise in deliberate
perversity would be needed to show, after reading
Chapter XII, that the Cathedral has nothing to do
with the murder, nor the murder with the
Cathedral. They are closely related, as I have
shown above, and in offering an explanation for
the involvement of the Cathedral, not only in
Jasper's motives for the crime but in his manner
of committing it, I am fully aware that I lay on
myself the onus of showing how the author could
have solved the formidable problems entailed in
planning a murder in a church at midnight with
complete secrecy and security for the murderer,
and maintaining such security during the time
taken for the disposal of the victim's body.
It can be seen in this chapter, in
which Jasper is preparing for the murder, that
the Cathedral plays a major part in his practical
arrangements, as well as having been one of the
motivating forces drawing him on. He finds it
necessary to stage something in the nature of a
dress-rehearsal for what he plans to do on
Christmas Eve. That he has rehearsed it 'hundreds
of times' in imagination under the influence of
opium is made clear later, in Chapter XXIII, 'The
Dawn Again'; but imagination is not enough. The
murderer, who has had a scapegoat, Neville
Landless, handed to him almost ready-made by the
obliging Mr. Crisparkle, must also have an alibi
or escape-route for his own security in the event
of anything going wrong with his plan. Now
Dickens when constructing alibis, as I have
hinted before, is not at his most brilliantly
inventive; one remembers the crude plan of Jonas
Chuzzlewit: to lock himself up in a small back
room which clearly had access to the street,
travel eighty miles to commit a murder and eighty
miles back - at the speed of coaching days - and
expect it to be believed, on the word of his wife,
that he had never left the room. The efforts to
throw suspicion on Lady Dedlock and George
Rouncewell are not much better; young Tom
Gradgrind's device of getting Stephen Blackpool
to hang about the bank for a few days in order to
attract suspicion to himself while Tom prepares
to rob it does not exactly bring Machiavelli to
mind; and Orlick's
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alibi (perhaps designedly) for the attack on
Pip's sister is very vague indeed. Bradley
Headstone, whose idea of disguising himself as
the lock-keeper-bargeman Riderhood might have had
a faint chance of success if he had not shown
himself to his would-be scapegoat complete with
disguise, and crowned this piece of ineptitude by
falling for a very obvious trap in imitating
exactly an alteration in Riderhood's dress, does
realize that his crime might have been more
efficiently committed; but his regrets are
directed to the manner of it rather than the
escape-route, which is quite as feeble as any of
the others.
We must not then expect a
brilliantly constructed alibi for Jasper based on
some diabolically clever fiddling with the
Cathedral clock hands or Edwin Drood's watch; the
plotting of this murder, related as it is to
human motives rather than mechanical puzzles,
will probably not be of astonishing ingenuity.
But Dickens, whether he knows it or not, has
learnt something from Collins. In referring
earlier (see p. 13) to his disdainful reference
to The Moonstone, I offered the theory
that a part, at least, of his dislike of it was
based on the craft or cunning used by Collins
with intent to mislead readers. But it is
possible that Dickens found himself mistaken; the
cunningly contrived 'clues', instead of 'making
enemies of readers', seemed, astonishingly, to
increase their admiration of the author. Now if
there is one quality loudly absent from all the
above examples of crooks evading justice, it is
that of cunning, craft or artfulness on the part
of their author in devising their escape-routes.
But in Edwin Drood the murderer's scheme
of self-protection, while still carrying the mark
of Dickensian simplicity, is very much more
carefully prepared, convincing and indeed more
efficient than any he has attempted before. This
can be seen in the way Neville Landless is
prepared for the rôle of scapegoat. From the
first number as published (Ch. IV) the author has
seen that Jasper will need an intensely
prejudiced 'Jackass in Authority' to come to the
support of the implicit accusation of Neville. He
provides it in Sapsea, the Mayor. Mr. Sapsea,
consulted by Jasper and Crisparkle with the
accused Neville after the murder, expresses his
opinion that the case has a dark look: in short (and
here his eyes rest full
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on Neville's countenance), an un-English
complexion. But Jasper is building up the case
against Neville well before the crime is
committed, almost from the moment they meet at
the Crisparkle dinner-party, and in a rather more
subtle way than any of the author's previous
criminals could have hoped to manage. We infer
that he has seen (as he would be quick to see)
the admiration of Neville for Rosa; he seizes the
opportunity immediately, follows the two young
men and foments their quarrel, afterwards
exaggerating to Crisparkle the extent of Neville's
outburst and taking care to enlist the sympathy
of Crisparkle's mother by telling her all about
it on the following moming under pretence of
making an apology. Mrs. Crisparkle's antagonism
to Neville having been ensured, the antagonism of
most of respectable Cloisterham will inevitably
follow. Dickens' s notes for this chapter (VIII
as published) include the phrase with which we
are now familiar: 'Jasper lays his ground.'
Dickens also lays his ground. It is
obvious from that note that Jasper is planning or
plotting for the future; but by the light thrown
on his state of mind in Chapter XXIII (quoted on
p. 63) it seems very probable that he has still
at this stage (fomenting the quarrel) not
absolutely decided on the murder of his nephew.
The appearance of Neville - almost ready groomed
for the scapegoat part - must surely be the
greatest temptation he has faced yet. And then
Crisparkle (Ch. X, 'Smoothing the Way'), as
though bent on playing Jasper' s game, virtually
forces another temptation in him, one which will
make time, place and fellow-traveller adhere:
'. ..In
a word, Jasper, I want to establish peace between
these two young fellows.'
A very perplexed expression took
hold of Mr. Jasper' s face; a very perplexing
expression too, for Mr. Crisparkle could make
nothing of it.
'How?' was Jasper's inquiry,
in a low and slow voice, after a silence.
'For the "how" I
come to you. I want to ask you to do me the great
favour and service of interposing with your
nephew (I have already interposed with Mr.
Neville), and getting him to write you a short
note, in his lively way, saying that he is
willing to shake hands. I know what a good-natured
fellow he is, and what influence you have with
him. And without
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in the
least defending Mr .Neville, we must ail admit
that he was bitterly stung.'
Jasper turned that perplexed face
towards the fire. Mr. Crisparkle continuing to
observe it, found it even more perplexing than
before, inasmuch as it seemed to denote (which
could hardly be) some close internal calculation.
'I know that you are not
prepossessed in Mr. Neville's favour,' the Minor
Canon was going on, when Jasper stopped him:
'You have cause to say so. I am not,
indeed.'
'Undoubtedly, and I admit his
lamentable violence of temper, though I hope he
and I will get the better of it between us. But I
have exacted a very solemn promise from him as to
his future demeanour towards your nephew, if you
do kindly interpose; and I am sure he will keep
it.'
'You are always responsible and
trustworthy, Mr. Crisparkle. Do you really feel
sure that you can answer for him so confidently?'
'1 do.'
The perplexed and perplexing look
vanished.
'Then you relieve my mind of a great
dread, and a heavy weight,' said Jasper. '1 will
do it.' (Ch. X, pp. 85-6)
This dialogue is another piece of ambiguous
writing: the ironic parenthetic 'which could
hardly be' is a hint; and it indicates a crisis
in Jasper's mind, known to the narrator but
unknown or at most only half guessed at by the
reader, in which the final temptation is offered
and accepted and the decision taken to commit the
murder. Crisparkle's phrase, 'to establish peace'
, instantly conveys to Jasper that some action
must be taken by him if a part of his yet
incomplete plan - the recently acquired scapegoat
- is not to collapse. He must either act as
mediator with Crisparkle, or refuse to do so. If
he refuses, he loses Crisparkle's sympathy, and
therefore to some extent the sympathy of
Cloisterham, which he will need after if the
murder is to be done; but if he agrees and plays
the part Crisparkle asks, the two young men will
be reconciled (he knows Edwin's easy-going good
nature) and there will be the end of the
scapegoat. He realizes that he must now make up
his mind as to whether the murder is to be
committed or not, for if he loses the scapegoat.
the murder must either be given up or committed
without one. Now if the murder is
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to be done, why throw away the scapegoat, so
opportunely offered? But if the murder is not
done, he must lose Rosa to Edwin and Egypt. It
seems to me that arguments like these, twisting
about in Jasper's mind at this moment, amply
account for the perplexed and, to Crisparkle,
perplexing look. There is one other point which
may be made here, the textual justification for
which I have quoted on page 83. I think it
possible that in the second mention of the 'perplexed
face' quoted above, to which is added that 'it
seemed to de note some close internal calculation',
Dickens intended Jasper to be realizing that the
ensuing Christmas Day would fall on a Sunday. It
would be the final temptation; and in considering
Jasper's fall one must recollect the passage from
Our Mutual Friend quoted above (p. 75): '.
..great criminals ...very rarely tell of their
struggles against the crime. Their struggles are
towards it.'
Jasper, as created by Dickens, would
see the murder slipping away from him through
Crisparkle's well-meant interference. At the same
time, he would see the Minor Canon offering him a
perfect opportunity to gratify in reality his
lust fantasy - by now almost a craving. It is the
crisis of the novel. 'I will do it,' he says. And
he means that he will commit the murder.
Dickens's notes for this crisis
chapter (X) open as follows:
Smoothing the Way
* * *
That is, for Jasper's plan, through Mr.
Crisparkle: who takes new ground on Neville's new
confidence.
The chapter title is itself
ambiguous: 'Smoothing the Way' refers ostensibly
to Crisparkle's efforts to reconcile the two
young men; but the author's notes indicate the
real intention. ' ...through Mr. Crisparkle'
means that Crisparkle is in fact helping the
murder on - smoothing its way. Neville's 'new
confidence' is that he admires (is in love with)
Rosa. Crisparkle's 'new ground' is that, now
knowing this, he cannot passively acknowledge the
existence of the feud between Drood and Landless,
he seeming to support Landless as a
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member of his household. He therefore feels it
his duty, as well as his inclination, to make
peace between the two young men. He calls on
Jasper for this purpose, but the messenger of
peace is really the tempter; he is offering
Jasper the opportunity of bringing the pair
together. Crisparkle's innocence is contributing
to the murder, and that Jasper realizes the irony
of this is made clear by his fit of laughter as
he later overhears the Minor Canon making
arrangements with Neville for the meeting, on the
night of the exploration of the Cathedral with
Durdles (Ch. XII, p. 105).
From this time, Jasper's purpose is
clear, relentless and straightforward. He now
arranges for the dress-rehearsa! of his murder,
the Night with Durdles, in which he unaccountably,
as the narrator has it, explores the Cathedral
from bottom to top, from crypt to tower. This 'unaccountable'
expedition was to be accounted for by Dickens,
according to his notes, 'at last' i.e., in the
final chapters. In his absence many attempts have
been made to fill the blank; but I have seen none
that take into account the simplicity - it might
be termed naïveté by twentieth-century readers
- with which he has attempted to obfuscate the
reader (or the detective police) in his past work,
some of which I have quoted above. The
explanation I offer here is an exceedingly simple
one and maintains the thesis that the Cathedral
is an integral part of the book and an integral
part of the murder, even that it is in some sort
responsible for the murder, by its own negligence:
that Jasper the choirmaster, seeking to murder
his nephew under the driving power of complex
motives, knows and acknowledges that the Cathedra!
is one of them, and must be included in the
murder if the murder is to express his
accumulated hate.
Assume, then, that Jasper's 'plan',
as usual for Dickens, was without clever
elaboration, but that this time, instead of being
a weakness, the simplicity made for success. The
actual movements of the three characters from
midnight on cannot be in very much doubt. Neville
is clearly telling the truth as far as he knows
it about the midnight visit to the river. Jasper's
power of hypnotic suggestion has been mentioned
already; it was to be used at full strength on
his two guests after the Christmas Eve dinner. A
hint of this is given in
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Neville's answer to Crisparkle the following
day:
'You left Mr. Jasper's last night, with Edwin
Drood... at what hour?'
'Was it at twelve o'clock?' asked
Neville, with his hand to his confused head, and
appealing to Jasper. (Ch. XV , p. 134)
He is vaguely aware that Jasper
had 'suggested' that the two young men should go
down to the river 'to see the action of the wind
there'. On Edwin's return alone, Jasper again was
to 'suggest' that it might be more interesting
still to see it from the Cathedral tower, to
which he still has the key; or alternatively (he
cannot be expected to have predicted the storm)
for Edwin to take his last look at Cloisterham
before departing for Egypt, from this vantage
point. On whatever pretext, Edwin, once inveigled
up the tower, is strangled there with the long
black scarf worn by Jasper. His body is pitched
over, to land in the graveyard below. Jasper
hurries down to it, and having ascertained that
there are no watchers, hustles it into the tomb -
Sapsea, Drood or other - that he has prepared for
it on the night of the 'expedition'. He then
returns to his Gate House, removes all traces of
his night's activities from himself and, at the
moment when he can reasonably be expected to have
noticed his nephew' s absence, appears at Minor
Canon Corner, distracted and suitably pale.
The strength of this plan lies in
the simplicity of its safeguard for the murderer:
should any stray and sleepless Cloisterham night-wanderer
walk into its operation at any point, Jasper has
a perfectly good story to tell, right up to the
very last moment - the actual disposal of the
body. The whole thing was an accident, says the
distracted uncle. He had been over-persuaded by
his nephew into taking him up the tower; they had
both under-estimated the strength of the wind up
there; Edwin rashly ventured too near to the edge
- and should anyone seem disposed to discover
signs of throttling, Jasper has only to elaborate
his story to include an attempted rescue in which
the scarf somehow became entangled, etc., etc.
It is possible that Jasper was to
have had an even simpler plan - merely to have
staged the 'accident' outlined above and been
chief mourner at his nephew' s funeral - but to
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have realized, after meeting the Landlesses,
what a cloud of suspicion he could throw upon
Neville if he could make the body disappear. As
to its disappearance, Dickens probably shared
with most of his readers the belief that
quicklime had the property of completely
assimilating a human body, clothes and all as he
shared their belief in spontaneous combustion,
and, had he lived, might well have defended that
belief in another preface. But as I noted on page
22, the scientific plausibility of the plot is
not of the first importance. If it be granted
that Jasper murdered his nephew, and that in
murdering him the Cathedral building was in some
way involved - particularly the Cathedral tower,
for he appears to refer to it in chapter XXIII
when under the influence of opium:
It was a
journey, a difficult and dangerous journey. That
was the subject in my mind. A hazardous and
perilous journey, over abysses where a slip would
be destruction. Look down, look down! You see
what lies at the bottom there? (p. 207)
then I submit that some such plan as I have
outlined above must have been in the author's
mind for his criminal. An alibi - that Jasper was
elsewhere - is out of the question for a
cathedral choirmaster on Christmas Eve and
Christmas Day. There must be then an escape-route:
a convincing story which will make murder look
like accident in the event of interruption in the
act. A fall from the tower is surely the only
plausible way of doing this; and by using the
tower in this way Jasper achieves, as he thinks,
complete safety for himself. The author at the
same time achieves complete mystery, though a
hint has been given as far back as the novel's
opening paragraph, that the tower is foremost in
Jasper's consciousness as he recovers from one of
his opium-induced 'journeys' : ' An ancient
English Cathedral Town? How can the ancient
English Cathedral town be here? The well-known
massive grey square tower of its old Cathedral?
How can that be here!'
Such an explanation of the
involvement of the tower will account for the
unaccountable, giving a reason for Jasper's 'whim'
of exploring it. He must make himself familiar
with the winding staircase and the way up, which
'lies through
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strange places... level low-arched galleries...
narrower and steeper staircases' , if he is to
lead Edwin Drood up there on Christmas Eve; and
Durdles, obviously, is the man to show him the
way. Without a dress rehearsal (I have termed it
so because the thing has been 'rehearsed' already
'hundreds of times') he would never have dared to
put the plan into operation. There were too many
abysses (literal or figurative) where a slip
might mean destruction (or discovery). He
receives two warnings on the 'expedition' night:
Durdles it seems was 'sleeping it off' in the
crypt at this time last year; and the boy Deputy,
to Jasper' s surprise and fury, is haunting the
close as they come out of the crypt. He cannot
guarantee an uninterrupted night and has planned
accordingly; if he is discovered, his story is
ready and all he will lose is the scapegoat part
of his scheme, Neville Landless - which in any
case was an elaboration introduced at a later
stage. But the author intends him to succeed, for
he has a card yet to play:
And this
is another spell against which the shedder of
blood for ever strives in vain. There are fifty
doors by which discovery may enter. With infinite
pains and cunning, he double locks and bars forty-nine
of them, and cannot see the fiftieth standing
wide open. (Our Mutual Friend, Bk. 4, Ch.
VII)
Jasper's murder of his nephew
avenges years of devotion acknowledged too often
by careless acceptance sometimes amounting to
snubs; it takes in his sister' s marriage to
Drood and settles his long debt of hatred to the
Cathedral. And it clears the way for his pursuit
of Rosa. At the same time the plan ensures that
he himself shall be the victim, the bereaved;
Edwin Drood will mysteriously disappear, or die
by accident, or seem to have been murdered by
Neville Landless, at whom suspicion has been
cleverly directed. And by throttling his victim
he has ensured that no falling shriek shall rouse
a drunken Durdles, who might be asleep in the
crypt.
But he knows nothing of the ring
Edwin bears on his body:
...Mr.
Jasper dropped in for a watch-glass the other day,
and, in fact, I showed these articles to him,
remarking that if he should wish to make a
present to a gentleman relative, on any
particular occasion- But he said with a smile
that he had an inventory in his mind of all the
jewellery his gentleman
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relative
ever wore; namely, his watch and chain, and his
shirt-pin. (Ch. XIV , p. 125)
for he has no knowledge of the Will of Rosa's
father, diverted from him by the innocent but
instinctive action of Rosa her- self (Ch. IX, p.
70 and Ch. XI, p. 96). The ring is the fiftieth
door, wide open and unseen, leading to detection
and the condemned cell.