If we suppose (and it has
been supposed many times) that Dickens in this
novel had the intention of portraying the
psychological development of a disturbed mind - or,
as he himself might put it, a criminal mind - it
seems likely that he would want to show that mind
putting down its roots, and to give some account
of the soil or environment in which those roots
grew. He did it for Bradley Headstone; he
sketched it in for Uriah Heep; and he gave it in
full with considerable sympathy for Magwitch the
convict. But in the existent fragment of Edwin
Drood there is no trace at all of the inner
lives of either John Jasper or Edwin Drood as
they were before the book opens. Oddments of
practical information we have, certainly: Edwin
is an orphan; his father's firm has Egyptian
connections, his patrimony is small, his father (by
inference) married Jasper's sister and is buried
in Cathedral ground (see Durdles, Ch. V) which
gives Jasper a rather tenuous root in Cloisterham.
But there is a purposeful avoidance of any
mention of their pasts, which becomes significant
when comparison is made with Rosa Bud and the
Landless twins, all of whom have their childhood
and early youth strongly etched in. I have drawn
from this the inference that Jasper's character
and motives were to be developed later, by means
of the 'backward light' technique Dickens
explained to Wilkie Collins. He did not,
unhappily, live to illuminate Edwin Drood in this
way, but there has been plenty of hindsight,
provided unwittingly by Stevenson (Dr. ]ekyll
and Mr. Hyde) and Wilde (The Picture of
Dorian Grey), used by many who have felt that
Dickens has 'anticipated' later ideas and
theories-among them those of Freud and
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the psychoanalysts.
Edmund Wilson, in 'Dickens: The Two Scrooges'
(contained in The Wound and the Bow) (1)
sees Jasper as a 'dual personality'. Dickens,
says Wilson, 'is to explore the deep entanglement
and conflict of the bad and the good in one man'.
Jasper is to be both innocent and wicked-though
Philip Collins (2), rightly suspicious of
a conjecture for which there is no apparent
evidence in the text, writes: 'Throughout. his
fiction and journalism, Dickens regards murderers
as unequivocally and entirely wicked men. Where,
one wonders, does Mr. Wilson detect the 'good' in
John Jasper?'
The post-Stevenson and Doppelganger
lights, however, continue to shine brilliantly.
In The Decoding of 'Edwin Drood' (3)
Mr . Charles Forsyte subjects the entire fragment
to their penetrating rays, discovering references
and allusions to the theme of duality to an
astonishing extent; but Mr. Forsyte in my opinion
goes too far, and inevitably finds what he is
looking for. He also makes it quite clear that he
not only postulates two personalities within
Jasper but sees them as separable and at times
completely separate, the 'good' side having
neither knowledge nor consciousness of the 'bad':
'The two personalities are distinct, the
affectionate uncle having no inkling of the
murderous plans of his counterpart' (p. 82). On
the other hand, Mr. Forsyte stipulates, 'The
Murderer knows everything' (p. 196).
This is Jekyll and Hyde without the
chemistry , for Mr . Forsyte, rightly I think,
discounts the opium in this context and sees it
as being taken by Jasper only for relief. But
with or without chemistry, the idea of a mind so
divided that memory and conscience can link its
two sides only in one direction, and that the
direction of evil, would have been a very large
pill indeed for the middle-class reader of 1870
to swallow. Moreover, whether by means of opium
or by means of psychological tension, such a
splitting of the personality reduces the 'curious
and new idea' of Dickens to something very like a
parlour trick, which both Stevenson and Wilde in
their different ways thought only suitable for
short-story work. If this were to be the
resolution of Jasper's discordance, Dickens could
hardly have escaped an accusation of plagiarism
of Wilkie Collins. Franklin Blake in The
Moonstone takes a diamond, but is under the
influence of
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a drug and is therefore
innocent. John Jasper in Edwin Drood takes a life,
but is under the influence of either the same
drug or some kind of psychological sickness. Is
he also innocent? If, as Edmund Wilson has it,
Jasper is both innocent and wicked, and in the
kind of way Mr. Forsyte postulates, it seems to
me that Dickens would be demanding a degree of
psycho-medical sophistication in his readers
which they probably did not possess. It would,
surely, have fudged theissue ofresponsibility
for the murder. For if the guilty Jasper is to
suffer death for his crimes, the separate,
blameless and innocent Jasper must die also. This
might have been the tragedy of Jasper as seen by
Dickens, but I doubt it. He was far too
thoroughly impregnated with Shakespeare not to
have known that a tragic figure contributes
directly to his own downfall through innate
faults or weaknesses in himself. The 'innocent'
Jasper of the split-mind theory is far too
innocent; he has merely been the victim, from his
cradle, of 'circumstances over which he has had
no control'-one of those circumstances being his
alter ego, the 'guilty' or wicked Jasper, who has
committed a murder of which he, the innocent, has
no knowledge. Which is to blame? And there is a
further standpoint from which it can be seen that
the completely separable personality idea will
not do for Dickens, particularly when he is
writing for the public: it must be remembered
that he was a committed Christian with a strong
faith in his own particular interpretation of the
New Testament (there is overwhelming evidence for
it in all his writing, private and public). His
view surely must have been that, however divided
the mind of one of his characters might be, that
character would have a soul which as a single
entity would be answerable ultimately to God for
its behaviour. To put it simply, Jasper might
think he was two persons, but his author would
know him as one.
The key to an understanding of what
Dickens was about in this book lies in his
attitude to religion, and in particular to the
New Testament and the manner of its presentation
in churches at the time he was writing. It is too
often forgotten that the Cathedral dominates the
cover design, the opening sentences, and broods
over the whole book as the Prison
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broods over Little
Dorrit. Jasper serves it with his musical
talent and hates it with his soul. This tension
is set up in the very first pages of the novel as
he moves from opium den to chancel, and must be
of profound importance in its development. The
Cathedral has been selected as part of the design,
and unless some religious significance is
intended, it becomes mere scenery-which is unlike
Dickens in his later work. The choirmaster,
hating the cramped monotony of his existence and
ill-paid for his service, must have, in the
author's mind, strong reasons for continuing to
serve. He is a free agent and probably has other
sources of income (see Edwin's comment, p. 54
above) and that he does not leave must be his own
choice. He carries on, hypocritically keeping up
the appearance of conventional worship. Like
Pecksniff, whom he so little resembles in other
ways, he will do evil of his own free will, and
not under compulsion of any para-normal psychosis
which might be seen as an excuse for his actions
or a mitigation of the author's ultimate
disapproval and condemnation.
I do not seek to discount the' dual
personality' theory altogether; I merely advance
the suggestion that it is possible to over-exercise
it until its supportive evidence begins to bear a
strong likeness to the special pleading of an
advocate bent on pulling everything in, however
distant, which appears to point in his client's
favour. That duality of one kind or another is
intended here-in the book as a whole and in all
probability in, the character of Jasper himself-it
would be very difficult to deny, taking only the
evidence in the text.These points, for
example, have been noted many times:
Miss Twinkleton and her
double existence.
Durdles, speaking of
himself as someone else.
Mr. Sapsea, referred to
as the Dean's 'Fetch'.
The Landless twins, whose
sympathetic rapport enables them on occasion to
think as one person.
Mr. Grewgious, who in his
talk with Edwin refers to the lover having 'no
existence separable from that of the
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beloved object of his
affections, and as living at once a doubled life
and a halved life'.
The two waiters at Staple
Inn.
Mrs. Crisparkle and her
sister (' A pair of china shepherdessess').
These and a
great many more (all to be found in Mr . Forsyte's
book) make it I think a reasonable assumption
that Dickens had the theme of duality in his mind
at this time. If I do not go along with Mr.
Forsyte all the way, it is because I feel that,
if Dickens had deliberately intended all the 'pair'
references that Forsyte finds, even the great
exaggerator himself might have felt that he was
overdoing it. But if Mr. Forsyte be found guilty
of somewhat overstating his case, the case is not
thereby nullified. Undoubtedly there is a
division of some sort within Jasper himself; but
we shall do better to go back to the first
indication we have that Dickens had any such idea
in his head - the account of Forster (see p. 19),
some of which I reproduce here for particular
attention:
I laid aside the fancy I
told you of, and have a very curious and new idea
for my new story. Not a communicable idea (or the
interest of the book would be gone) but a very
strong one, though difficult to work.' The story,
I learnt immediately afterward, was to be that of
the murder of a nephew by his uncle; the
originality of which was to consist in the review
of the murderer's career by himself at the close,
when its temptations were to be dwelt upon as if,
not he the culprit, but some other man, were the
tempted. ...
I have never
been able to understand, in studying the
paragraph above, why so many commentators have
attacked Forster for saying that an
incommunicable idea was immediately communicated
to himself. If this is really a contradiction, it
makes either Forster or Dickens look very foolish.
But it is the story Dickens is communicating, not
necessarily the idea; moreover, we should not
interpret the word 'incommunicable' too literally.
Forster is quite consistent if one accepts that
he transcribed the letter accurately in the full
knowledge that Dickens's meaning was that the
idea (whatever it was)
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could not be communicated
to the general reader until the later stages of
the novel were reached, or 'the interest of the
book would be gone'-i.e., the reader's 'interest'.
The notion that Forster will lose interest in a
work of Dickens if the central theme or plot is
told him at the outset is manifestly absurd, and
Dickens uses 'interest' here in exactly the same
sense as he has used it on previous occasions in
outlining possible plots. 'Interest' in this
context with Dickens always means the situation
or plot, as designed to capture and hold the
general reader's interest; and what could be
communicated to the general reader at the outset,
and what could be communicated to his friend and
confidant Forster, were two very different things.
I believe Forster also to have been
quite as careful and accurate in reporting what
seems to have been a subsequent conversation with
Dickens ('immediately afterward'). This of course
is hearsay; but I am not before a jury and I
offer the suggestion that Forster, when he came
to write his account of this conversation, used a
particular word ('temptation') because he
recollected it as having been used by Dickens.
Now if Forster had written:
...a review of the
murderer's career by himself at the close, when
its crimes were to be dwelt upon as if, not he
the culprit, but some other man, were the criminal
...
it might with some reason
be assumed that Forster (and through him, Dickens)
intended double, and separable, personalities
within the one man, for then the separation of
the personality would refer to the commission of
the crime, the doing of the deed; but Forster
uses 'temptations' and reinforces it with 'tempted'.
And I do not believe, as at least one commentator
has it, that Dickens did not appreciate the
difference between crime, which only exists when
the deed has been done, and sin, which exists
when the deed is intended or even only
contemplated. If the word 'temptation' means
anything at all here, it means that a struggle of
some kind was to be present in Jasper's mind;
that he was to be tempted and therefore to have
at least some opportunity to make a choice
between good and evil. He is not therefore
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conceived as having been
a monster from birth like Shakespeare's Richard
III. He is rather to be thought of as Macbeth,
who yielded
to that suggestion
Whose horrid image doth unfix my hair
And make my seated heart knock at my ribs
Against the use of nature. ...(Macbeth, Act I, sc.
iii)
It is of
course impossible to say whether the temptations
of Macbeth hovered over Dickens's mind as he
spoke (if he did speak) of the temptations of
Jasper. But that shades of the play were there
during the writing has been noted many times.
There are direct and indirect allusions to it;
and without going so far as to say that he had a
Macbeth-like character in mind when creating
Jasper, it is permissible to deduce from the
evidence above that Jasper, like Macbeth, was
tempted and fell from a state of what must have
been at least comparative grace. Therefore there
was in the mind of Dickens, if not in the first
six numbers of Edwin Drood some good or potential
good in John Jasper. This could only have been
revealed in the later stages of the book-by means
of the 'backward light' , in fact-and very
probably as part of the' confession' , if that is
the right word for it, referred to in the
sentence following the last one of Forster's
quoted above: 'The last chapters were to be
written in the condemned cell, to which his
wickedness, all elaborately elicited from him as
if told of another, had brought him' (Forster,
Vol. 111, Ch. 18).
That sentence is the fundamental
justification for those who believe that the
author intended, in Jasper, two separate minds.
And indeed, there can be little doubt that, if
Forster is reporting accurately, those two last
statements of his can only mean that at the time
of this 'confession' Jasper thought that he
either was or had been two persons. But Forster
neither says nor infers that Jasper was two
persons, or either one of them, at the time
the wickedness was committed.
I have already offered an
explanation for the 'look of intentness and
intensity' which was always seen on Jasper's face
when the face was turned to his nephew. If in
that first scene the uncle was indeed forcing
affection for the boy
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to the forefront of his
mind to help him chain back the strength of
jealousy and hatred that lay behind it, Forster (and
Dickens) would seem to be justified in their use
of the word 'temptation'. It has seemed essential
to some critics to explain the apparent
contradiction between an affectionate look and a
murderous deed by postulating some psychosis or
hypnotic or self-mesmeric state which would allow
Jasper A not to know what Jasper B was doing at
the time of the murder or even during its
planning. It seems to me, however, that what
Dickens could have had in mind was something
simpler yet at the same time capable of deeper
complexity of treatment, and which would owe
nothing to the psychiatric hindsight of the
twentieth century .In analysing the character of
Edwin Drood above, I offered the theory that
Dickens, with (in this case) an author's
foreknowledge of the ultimate fate of his
characters, knew that he was to show later in the
book that Jasper at that first meeting with Edwin
had already reached the stage of fighting the
temptation to murder him. That this temptation
had been felt, and indulged as an imaginative
pleasure, is revealed in Chapter XXIII:
'. ..Look
here. Suppose you had something in your mind;
something you were going to do.'
'Yes, deary; something I was going to do?'
'But had not quite determined to do.'
'Yes, deary.'
'Might or might not do, you understand.'
'Yes.' With the point of a needle she stirs the
contents of the bowl.
'Should you do it in your fancy, when you were
lying here doing this?'
She nods her head. 'Over and over again.'
'Just like me! I did it over and over again. I
have done it hundreds of times in this room.'
'It's to be hoped it was pleasant to do, deary.'
'It was pleasant to do!'(Ch. XXIII, p. 206)
But at the
earlier stage, in Chapter II, he is still
indulging In the pleasure of opium-induced 'rehearsal'
of the deed, and as not yet yielded to the
temptation of carrying it out. He is still
struggling; and forces himself, as he forces
Edwin, to
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believe in his continued
devotion. This is deeper and more complex than
the simple hypocrisy practised by Pecksniff,
Chadband and Heep. Jasper is not merely hiding
his evil thoughts from the world; he is hiding
them from himself. In the imaginative process of
creating the character of Jasper, Dickens begins
with the old fundamental idea of a conflict of
good and evil in one man's mind. Temptation-and
therefore freedom of choice-are to be present as
usual; but in this case it is at first the
temptation to indulge in evil thoughts rather
than to commit evil deeds. As Jasper stands
before the Cathedral's High Altar and outwardly
offers worship to God in the form of exquisite
musical expression, his bored mind begins to
think how deeply satisfying it might be to throw
defiance in the Cathedral's face by the
commission of some evil deed-say murder. Murder
suggests the image of a victim, which though at
first repulsed with horror, takes with increasing
strength the figure of his nephew, his sister's
child, the boy of whom he is so fond. Putting
this thought aside as too horrible to contemplate,
the other more impersonal but more justifiable
enemy emerges: the Cathedral. He begins to see
the Cathedral as the source of all his
frustration and discontent; it has taken his
talent for music, which ought to have been his
relaxation and pleasure, and made it into a hard,
grinding daily penance which he resents. It is a
poor paymaster to the musician. His work is
acknowledged indeed, but only in words. His
inferiors-Crisparkle the musical amateur, and the
Dean (it is difficult to believe that Dickens and
Jasper have not a contempt, good-natured or
otherwise, for the Dean)-are better rewarded than
he. As year after year goes by, his hatred for
the Cathedral and all that it represents grows
steadily; but he cannot leave it, for in leaving
it and leaving Cloisterham, he leaves Rosa. He is
trapped. What is he to do, short of carving
demons out of the stalls and seats and desks?
Must he take to 'carving them out of [his] heart?'
It is unquestionably possible that
an artist of the power of Dickens could have so
written this novel that, completed, it might have
shown how even at that moment of climax in the
first scene with his nephew Jasper loved the boy
and
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was fighting with all the
moral strength he possessed to save his soul (and
Edwin's body) alive. This is ambivalence and
something more; but it is not a complete
personality split. The John Jasper who loved
Edwin Drood was the same John Jasper who hated
him. The Jasper who fought to save Drood was the
same Jasper who was fighting to kill him. Each
knew perfectly well that the other existed; but
they had become polarized as antagonists within
the same mind. Dickens was no more above
reworking earlier material than was Bach or
Handel, and this is the reappearance of a theme
which had already been stated in The Haunted
Man (1848) and earlier still in another
Christmas book. The Cricket on the Hearth
(1845), in which Peerybingle the Carrier, in the
belief that his wife is false, harbours thoughts
of murder against her supposed lover:
There was a gun, hanging
on the wall. He took it down, and moved a pace or
two towards the door of the perfidious Stranger's
room. He knew the gun was loaded. Some shadowy
idea that it was just to shoot this man like a
wild beast, seized him, and dilated in his mind
until it grew into a monstrous demon in complete
possession of him, casting out all milder
thoughts and setting up its undivided empire.
That phrase is wrong. Not casting out his milder
thoughts, but artfully transforming them.
Changing them into scourges to drive him on.
Turning water into blood, love into hate,
gentleness into blind ferocity. Her image,
sorrowing, humbled, but still pleading to his
tenderness and mercy with resistless power, never
left his mind; but staying there, it urged him to
the door; raised the weapon to his shoulder;
fitted and nerved his finger to the trigger; and
cried 'Kill him! In his bed! ('Chirp the Third')
Note
here that Dickens makes a particular point on the
state of the Carrier's mind. Having written that
the idea , grew into a monstrous demon in
complete possession of him, casting out all
milder thoughts. ..', he begins afresh paragraph
firmly stating: 'That phrase is wrong. Not
casting out his milder thoughts, but artfully
transforming them. ...' Not only is there no
suggestion here that his mind becomes wholly
exclusive of milder thoughts; there is a positive
contradiction that this is so. At the height of
the urge to kill,
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the milder
images may add to it, but they do not disappear
from the consciousness altogether .
In The Haunted Man the idea
of self-division is taken a little further in
that the morbidly melancholic thoughts of Redlaw
the chemist do actually take the form of a
visible likeness of himself: a ghost capable of
sustaining a dialogue with its original; but
there is not the slightest suggestion that either
the ghost or Redlaw pursue an existence
independently of each other or that Redlaw, when
he yields to the temptation of the ghost, yields
to anything other than a symbolic representation
of his own state of mind. This is made clear at
the end of the story:
Some
people have said, since, that he only thought
what has been herein set down; others, that he
read it in the fire, one winter night about the
twilight time; others, that the Ghost was but the
representation of his own gloomy thoughts, and
Milly the embodiment of his better wisdom. (Ch.
III)
I do not argue that Dickens was
incapable of imagining completely separable
personalities within one mind (with or without
Stevenson's chemical machinery). What I do say is
that in the year 1870, a man whose mind could be
shown to be so divided between villainy and
virtue that the virtuous side had no conception
of what the villainous side was planning or doing
would simply be set down as insane. It must be
noted that in 1843, shortly after Dickens's
return from his first American visit, the famous
M'Naghten case was heard at the Old Bailey.
Daniel M'Naghten shot Sir Robert Peel's secretary
in Downing Street. At his trial for murder the
plea of insanity was made on his behalf. In his
direction to the jury , Chief Justice Tindal said:
The
question is whether this man had the competent
use of his understanding so that he knew that he
was doing a wicked and wrong thing. If he was not
sensible that it was a violation of the law of
God or man, undoubtedly he was not responsible
for the act or liable to any punishment whatever.
M'Naghten was acquitted. An uproar followed and a
debate in the House of Lords, after which a
symposium of Judges advised their Lordships on a
direction which ought to be
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given to a
jury in such cases and which became known as the
'M'Naghten Rules'. The advice states:
The jury
ought to be told in all such cases that every man
is presumed to be sane, and to possess a
sufficient degree of reason to be responsible for
his crimes, until the contrary be proved to their
satisfaction; and that, to establish a defence on
the ground of insanity , it must be clearly
proved that, at the time of the committing of the
act, the party accused was labouring under such a
defect of reason, from disease of the mind, as
not to know the nature and quality of the act he
was doing; or, if he knew that, that he did not
know he was doing what was wrong.
These
words were used by Mr. Justice Humphreys in his
charge to the jury at the trial of Haigh, the
Acid Bath murderer, in 1949. (4)
The M'Naghten case created a great
deal of stir, and its 'Rules' have been used on
many occasions. It is unlikely that Dickens was
ignorant of it or had forgotten it when he came
to create Jasper. He would know that if it could
be shown that Jasper, when he murdered his nephew,
did not know that what he was doing was wrong, he
could be acquitted. The murderer might find
himself in a lunatic asylum, but quite possibly
not in the condemned cell; and we know, not only
from Forster but from Fildes, (5) that he
was expected there. I am convinced, on evidence
from his fiction, journalism and biographies, 'that
Dickens meant Jasper to be the latest portrait in
a line which had started with Bill Sikes: the
killers. They are all killers - Sikes, Rudge,
Chuzzlewit, Hortense, Blandois, Orlick, even
Magwitch, though he is not, in the Dickensian
sense, a murderer - and all killers with ordinary,
sordid, human motives like revenge, hatred,
jealousy, self-preservation, and so on. The last
but one, Bradley Headstone, is only a would-be
murderer, but he is no exception to the rest in
that all their killings were done physically,
with their own hands and in the full knowledge
that what they were doing was a violation of the
law of God and the law of man. In Dickens, there
may be a psychological reason, but never a
psychiatric excuse, for murder. In his work,
neither insanity nor the abuse of drugs would be
allowed as pleas on the killer's behalf. The
remaining possibility as a vehicle
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for
personality division is mesmerism (hypnotism) and
Fred Kaplan in Dickens and Mesmerism (6)
appears at first reading to have very little
doubt about the author's intentions:
But
through some mechanism that was to have been
explained in the final sections of the book,
undoubtedly Jasper was to have been revealed as
self-mesmerised, through some vehicle, perhaps
music or opium. Jasper could have conditioned
himself to go into mesmeric trance while under
the influence of opium; the mesmeric tool might
have been the drug itself. But whatever the agent,
Jasper lives in double consciousness, with two
separate states of being: his everyday mind and
his mesmeric state, in which he performs actions
that his normal consciousness may be unaware of,
may indeed purposely suppress because of the
immoral and unsocial needs that are being
gratified. He has kept them separate even from
himself, though occasionally words and actions
from his trance consciousness surface and appear
in normal states.
But the apparent confidence of this paragraph
fades on a closer look, and almost every line is
found to be qualified with doubt: 'some mechanism'
...'undoubtedly' ...'some vehicle' ...'perhaps
music or opium' ...'could have conditioned' ...'might
have been' ...'whatever the agent' ... and so on.
Mr. Kaplan certainly knows all about
mesmerism, but is less than convincing here as to
the way in which Dickens intended to use it.
Dickens in 1870 perhaps did not know quite so
much, though he had experimented with it and knew
of his own power in it and might well, as Kaplan
says, have been intending to make it apart of his
book. But not in this way. Kaplan appears to mean
that Jasper was in' double consciousness' while
planning or committing his crimes. I believe not.
The 'double consciousness' came later. Moreover,
it was strongly suspected in 1870, and is
universally accepted today, that no subject can
be directed or persuaded to perform any
profoundly significant or irrevocable act (sexual
intercourse for example) which he or she would
know to be incompatible with their own likely
behaviour in a normal state, whether that subject
be self-mesmerized or not. Jasper as imagined by
Dickens would not have committed his murder in a
trance. But Mr. Kaplan is so far right, I believe,
in that hypnotism
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was to be
used in showing Jasper's 'divided mind' after he
came to the prison and the condemned cell, in
which, as Forster says, 'the last chapters were
to be written' .By some means (and the odds are
heavy that Dickens meant some form of hypnotism
or mesmerism) Jasper's mind was then indeed,
after sentence of death, to divide itself, so
that he was able to indicate the manner of the
murder, with its motives and its roots, as though
he were telling the story of some other man; and
this, I suggest, was the' curious and new idea'
outlined to Forster, which was not 'communicable'
in the sense that Jasper's knowledge and power in
mesmerism were to be kept secret from the reader
until the final scenes, when they were to be used
against himself by another and stronger
practitioner-Helena Landless, perhaps. Hints were
to be given and the ground laid; his power over
Rosa is heavily underlined in two places and is
clearly to be seen, either at the time of reading
or at a later stage of revelation, as hypnotic:
He has
made a slave of me with his looks. He has forced
me to understand him; without his saying a word;
and he has forced me to keep silence, without his
uttering a threat. When I play, he never moves
his eyes from my hands. When I sing, he never
moves his eyes from my lips. When he corrects me,
and strikes a note, or a chord, or plays a
passage, he himself is in the sounds, whispering
that he pursues me as a lover, and commanding me
to keep his secret. I avoid his eyes, but he
forces me to see them without looking at them.
Even when a glaze comes over them (which is
sometimes the case), and he seems to wander away
into a frightful sort of dream in which he
threatens most, he obliges me to know it, and to
know that he is sitting close at my side, more
terrible to me then than ever. (Ch. Vll, pp. 53-4)
And in the
'Shadow on the Sundial' chapter:
The moment
she sees him from the porch, leaning on the
sundial, the old horrible feeling of being
compelled by him, asserts its hold upon her. She
feels that she would even then go back, but that
he draws her feet towards him. (Ch. XIX, p. 169)
More obscurely hinted is his power of suggestion
to Crisparkle, who finds himself at the Weir
discovering clues,
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with no
idea of how or why he came there (Ch. XVI). The 'creepy
powers of an abnormal kind' noted by Dr. Leavis (see
p. 15) are almost certainly those of hypnotism.
The precise form in which Dickens intended to
develop this sensitivity and power in Jasper
cannot be clearly seen in the half novel we have;
Mr. Kaplan's book is essential reading for those
wishing to speculate on this. All I note here is
that Dickens, in these indirect allusions to
transferred thought or intangible power, is
clearly preparing in his usual way for a later
revelation of their purpose. When the end comes
and the 'confession' is made, the reader will
clearly see, on looking back, to what all the
hints have been tending. It seems probable that
the 'interest' of the plot after the fourth of
fifth number is to turn on whether Edwin Drood
has disappeared (voluntarily or not) or has been
murdered. Dickens writes:
There is a
curious interest steadily working up to No.5,
which requires a great deal of art and self-
enial. ...So I hope-at Nos. 5 and 6 the story
will turn upon an interest suspended until the
end. Quoted in Clarendon edn., p. xxiv)
If this is so, the premature revelation of Jasper
as a deliberate and evilly inclined mesmerist
will not only virtually destroy the mystery; it
will rob the author of his' curious and new idea'
: the exhibition of a mind so deeply divided
against itself that its susceptibility to
mesmerism may result in its separation, at the
end of the book, into two distinct personalities,
the one capable of reporting on the temptations
and actions of the other. The mesmeric power of
Jasper is therefore 'not a communicable idea [to
the reader] or the interest of the book would be
gone'. Such a division of mind might well have
been accepted by readers, though it might be
asked today why, if Dickens had talked of
mesmerism, did Forster say nothing of it when
dealing with Edwin Drood in the Life?
Not to travel too far into the realms of
conjecture, there is a thoroughly probable
explanation for the silence: Forster would take
every step he could to ensure that unhallowed
hands in crude attempts to complete the Master's
work should be unable to claim
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assistance
or justification of any sort from him; he would
reveal or publish not a word more than he need,
and this may well be the reason for the non-appearance
of anything more than might have been deduced by
an intelligent reading of the published parts and
the author's notes. And without accusing him of
Jesuitry, one can point to his statement that
nothing had been written of the main parts
of the design (reinforced by the marginal
reference, 'Nothing written of his intentions', (7)
and justify him in not officiously recollecting
anything that had been said. But mesmerism
as a vehicle for inducing confession and
explanation is one thing; making it the
mainspring of a book's action is another. That
Dickens would have offered his readers a story in
which, to put it bluntly, a man is able to split
himself into two parts by means of opium,
mesmerism, music or whatever, one part to have no
knowledge or responsibility for what the other
part does or thinks, seems improbable. The man
would have been, to readers in 1870, a lunatic;
and Forster was one of the Commissioners in
lunacy. He, at least, must have known about M'Naghten.
And finally, Dickens's notes for
Chapter XVI begin: 'Jasper's artful use of the
communication (that Edwin's engagement had been
broken] on his recovery.' The creator of the
Artful Dodger knew what 'artful' meant; Jasper
was a clever crook and conscious of it. I have
quoted Forster above as using the word (temptation'
to some purpose. He also indicates clearly that
what brings Jasper to the condemned cell is quite
simply, wickedness. In the words of Sir Hartley
Shawcross nearly eighty years later at the trial
of the above-mentioned Haigh (another killer,
incidentally, who thought he had discovered a
detection-proof method of body disposal): ' A man
not mad but bad. ..'.
NOTES
1. Edmund
Wilson, 'Dickens: The Two Scrooges' in The
Wound and the Bow (Methuen, 1961).
2. Philip Collins, Dickens and Crime (Macmillan
& Co., 1962), p. 305.
3. Charles Forsyte, The Decoding of 'Edwin
Drood' (Gollancz, 1980).
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4. 'The
Trial of John George Haigh' in Notable British
Trials, ed. Lord Dunboyne (Wm. Hodge & Co.,
1953), Vol. 78, pp. 215-16.
5. Margaret Cardwell (ed.), The Mystery of
Edwin Drood (Oxford: The Clarendon Press,
1972), Appendix E, p. 239.
6. Fred Kaplan, Dickens and Mesmerism (Princeton
University Press, 1975), p. 153.
7. John Forster, The Life of Charles Dickens
(Chapman & Hall, 1874), Vol. Ill, p. 426.